I like your shading and style, looks nice and interesting, and I'm just wondering if your proportions doesn't reassemble actual picture unintentionally or it's your style. If that's the latter, You may like to try to exaggerate even more, if not, I suspect You are drawing single detail to perfection and than move to the next, and that makes getting proportions and shapes right next to impossible. Instead trying to get proportions and general shape right and than move to more and more detail. Just friendly advice . The bottom line is, that Your work looks promising, one day, I believe, You'll became a great artist
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